Once conferring and showing our animation to Miss Paige, we discussed that the narrative idea didn't really flow as well as we originally thought it was, because it would of been hard for the audience to depict that the ex-boyfriend was the stalker, and why the attack actually happened. Following Miss Paige's advice, we decided to change our genre to social realism, but the dark realm of it, focussing on aspects of domestic violence. We decided to make the main flashback a scene of Jessie and her boyfriend before they broke up, where he is manipulating her and is subtly hinting towards the idea of domestic abuse. However, we are keeping the counsellor scene and the ending the same, but we are changing the script in order to show her despair and true fear of her ex-boyfriend. These changes in the script will also make the narrative a lot clearer.
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